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ADVANCED RHYME SCHEMES AND TECHNIQUES

Updated: Jul 14

60 minute lesson estimate.


Parents with kids 5 and up Advanced Course


HERE YOU WILL START EXPANDING YOUR SKILLS WITH


ADVANCED RHYME SCHEMES


  1. Compound Rhymes: Rhymes that combine multiple words. Example: "Spill my skill like I’m ill / Kill at will, chill, it’s real."

  2. Cross Rhymes: Rhymes that occur in the middle of one line and at the end of the next. Example: "I got a flow that’s crazy / People say it’s so amazing."

  3. Slant Rhymes: Rhymes with similar but not identical sounds. Example: "I’m blessed with finesse / My words impress."




ADVANCED RHYME TECHNIQUES


  1. Double Entendres: Phrases with two meanings, one often risqué or humorous. Example: "I’m making hits like a batter, but I’m also batter in the mix."

  2. Wordplay: Clever use of words and phrases. Example: "I’m on another level, call it stairway to heaven."

  3. Alliteration: Repetition of initial consonant sounds. Example: "Big bad boss bringing bars."

  4. Assonance: Repetition of vowel sounds. Example: "I rhyme in time with a fine line."

  5. Consonance: Repetition of consonant sounds. Example: "Luck struck the duck, stuck in muck."


BY PLAYING AROUND WITH DIFFERENT COMBINATIONS OF SCHEMES AND TECHNIQUES YOU CAN CREATE NEW TRENDS AND SONG STYLES. Keep changing the topics, the point of view, the descriptions of colors, smells, and feelings. This will help you to continue to evolve your style and expand your song writing skill set. Use this with Advanced story telling.



ADVANCED STORY TELLING TECHNIQUES

  1. Flashbacks: Recounting past events to provide context or depth. Example: "Back in '99, I was dreaming of these times."

  2. Themes: Central topics or messages throughout the rap. Example: Exploring themes of struggle, triumph, love, or betrayal.

  3. Chronological Order: Telling a story in the order events happened. Example: Starting from the beginning and moving through to the end.

  4. First-Person Narrative: Rapping from your own perspective. Example: Sharing personal stories and experiences.


NEW SONG FRAMEWORKS

Try working on a set of songs for an album with a winning theme, CREATE a set of 20 positive word topics in a table you can use to create a compelling story to tell in music form with related words and words that rhyme with them.


Write 3 verses utilizing the techniques from above.


see Rapper's creative thinking diagram and pdf in your client dashboard.


RAP EXCERCISE

Here is a short list of Ai rhymes you can use and improve on and add to, try to create each one into a perfect set of 4 bars that can stand on its on. Look at how I experiment with different combinations to keep the song from getting too boring thought the topic is not at all impressive.


Cross Rhymes

(Struggle in the Poor Streets of San Jose)


Walking through the struggle where the poor streets lay,

San Jose nights, where dreams tend to sway.

Hustling every day, trying to find a way,

In the shadows of the city, hope begins to fray.


Add 4 bars here.


Slant Rhymes

(Going from San Jose to San Francisco)


Leaving San Jose, chasing Frisco lights,

Dreams on the highway, stars in the nights.

Bay's on the right, feeling the breeze so slight,

Bridges in sight, as we reach new heights.


Add 4 bars here.


Compound Rhymes

(Driving from San Francisco to Oakland on the Bay Bridge)


From Frisco to Oakland, cruising Bay Bridge lanes,

Tunnels and towers, breaking free from chains.

City lights refract, through panoramic panes,

Skyline’s a track, playing urban refrains.


Add 4 bars here.


Double Entendres and Wordplay

(Making $4200 Online)


Started in San Jose, the grind was heavy, weighty,

Hit the road to Frisco, mindset never shaky.

Six hours in the ride, profits never lazy,

Online hustle real, raking in that gravy.


Forty-two hundred, pockets getting weighty,

Doubled up my earnings, like a spread,

that's crazy. , gotta get the dough to make the bread

420 on the dot blazing trails like Hazy,

Cash flow nonstop, digits never flaky.


Clicking keys, making cheese, digits escalate,

Money growing like trees, future decorate.

Flipping streams, making greens, watch the aggregate,

Turning dreams into means, wealth I navigate.


From the Bay to the bridge, where the currents flow,

Oakland's on the horizon, see the bankroll grow.

Online schemes and themes, profits overflow,

Riding high on these dreams, watch the cash bestow.


Chorus Version 1


From San Jose to the Bay, making money all day,

In the fast lane, we stay, watch the hustle replay,

Stacking up cash, no delay, living dreams in the fray of a string,

the Bay Bridge lights guiding the way, shining bright, never leading me astray


Chorus Version 2


Hustle strong from the start, chasing dreams, playing smart,

From San Jose, chart the part, cashing in, that's the art,

Bay Bridge under stars, city lights, beat the dark,

Making moves, leaving marks, bigger gains, brighter sparks.


Chorus Version 3


From the Bay to the bridge, stacking cash, living big,

Online hustle's the gig, profits flip, watch 'em rig,

San Jose where we dig, dreams grow, they don't twig,

Frisco nights, we don't zig, straight to the top, we sprint, no jig.



now check out the video and you try this format to come up with one of your own.



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